Five Chapters "Done"...

The conversion from Third Person Limited to First Person has been… interesting. I can understand why the agent requested it (the story does feel a lot more personal), but there are parts that just don’t quite work as intended in 1st person.

Basically, for example, the introduction has the narrator telling us a little about Wibble, the planet on which the story takes place. Now, the story has Grendel, the protagonist, telling us a little about Wibble… which makes it feel more engaging, yes, but also suddenly makes it seem like Grendel is talking directly to the reader.

Which isn’t bad! But it is… weird. Like, is she telling this story to somebody in the book itself? If so, I might want to lead with that… but then we all know it turns out alright at the end, and I don’t know how I feel about that level of certainty…

Anyway, it has been a really interesting experiment. I’m on Chapter 6 right now, out of 30 Chapters, so that’s pretty okay. Current plan is to have the first draft of the new version done this week, and then read through and adjust a little before sending it off again next weekend… the agent has a busy reading schedule, and the sooner I can get on it the less likely I will have to wait another 6 months!

Hope everyone else is having a great March thus far!

Marching Forward!

Yes, yes, I made the same joke over on my Patreon page, but still. It’s true! February was a good month for me overall (short story contest 2nd place is pretty nice, and the agent request was the icing on that cake, plus getting to restart the Writers Group… ooh, that reminds me, I have to submit something to that tonight… I should do that right now, please stand by).

Phew! Done. Anyway, all in all, a good month for me. I have high hopes for March… I want to get back to submitting short stories to publications, rather than just to contests (contests are great and all, but the publications are what build my reputation, help me gain an audience, and occasionally even pay! All important factors). That will also mean getting back in the habit of reading more short stories as well, to make sure I’m submitting the kind of work that the publications publish (ugh, that sentence…), I need to get this novel finished up and sent back to “my” agent (gosh I hope so!), and then I need to get the next novel edited up to at least a 2nd draft standard.

This is the tricky part, as those of you who follow the blog regularly will know. What I really want to do right now is produce more work… write more fiction, whether long or short, rather than refine that I have into a better form of itself. But that’s a dangerous slope to start going down… and it is far, far more important to polish and submit work than it is to generate an endless supply of unpolished stuff.

Anyhoo, it’s looking to be a very promising March. Always nice to have a little bit of optimism in the forecast… we will see what the next week or two brings!

Editors Block

I mean, I know it’s not really a thing. But it feels like it sometimes… basically, I hate editing.

It’s an important part of the writing cycle. In fact, it may be the most important part of the writing cycle. Anyone can write gibberish for a few thousand words, but the ability to convert that into a story… that’s kind of the whole trick.

But as I sit here, going through 60K words I’ve already written, and tease and tweak the various sentences (in this case to convert 3rd person limited to 1st person), I find myself struggling in new and painful ways. And it’s not like this is going to go away: sure, when I am a published author with an agent and all that, there will be professional editors who can do amazing things with my drafts… but those drafts will STILL need to be edited before they are sent off! Nobody submits first-drafts. Nobody.

ANYWAY, all this to say that progress on Novel 3’s conversion has been slow, but at least I’m doing it. We’ll call that a win.

Second Writers Group tomorrow! Trying out a new venue, going to throw around a few new names, see if any stick. I miss the old MacGuffins (the previous Writers Group that I joined a few years back), but it wouldn’t feel right keeping the name without any of the founding members. Hopefully we come up with something that’s almost as clever.

Hope everyone is having a great week!

Yay for Agents! Sorta!

So I submitted Novel 3 to the nice people I’d really like to be my agent back in August… and they got back to me yesterday!

I mean, nobody ever said that the wheel of publishing grind quickly, just that they grind.

Regardless, the agent really liked my work… but wants to change the PoV of the novel from 3rd person to 1st person (which, I should’ve known before starting… YA novels tend to be in 1st person these days. It is the fashion, as they say).

Not going to be an easy task… but it is a measurable, straightforward one. And it shouldn’t take me more than a few weeks to finish that kind of revision and send it back off.

Meanwhile, I restarted the writing group (we’re meeting on Wednesdays, weekly), and that’s good because it will give me a forum to work on Novel 4 while I’m rewriting Novel 3. And maybe finish up a few short stories for submission as well…

Moral of the story: good news on the writing front! Not great news, yet, but definitely good news!

Second Place!

Well, I managed to get another podium position for a short story contest… so that’s something!

That makes it sound a bit more glamorous than it actually is. The competition was between 13 submissions of two thousand words or less, and of those submissions I managed to land 2nd. Which, don’t get me wrong, still very happy about! I think this is the second time I’ve placed second out of three contests they’ve run, and one first place, so I’m at least consistent!

I should give a big shout out to my “voice actors”, the group of friends that helped out by lending their voices to the recording. The voice record has been a tonne of fun! Maybe in the future I will do an actual audio story, rather than just reading one of my short stories out loud, but that’s a future goal.

In other good news, huzzah for more short stories I can post on the website! I’ll put out a link to my Patrons later this week or early next, and then everyone else can enjoy it a week after that.

Right! Back to the writing! Tomorrow is the first meeting of the new Writers Group, which is exciting, but also means I need to be a bit organized for that!

Tintian and the King's Claw Available as Print on Demand!

Hello good people! I’m excited to announce that my first novel, “Tintian and the King’s Claw”, is now available as a print-on-demand book!


Let’s face it… ebooks are great, but sometimes having a physical book in your hands is just… better. And now you too can own a copy!

You can follow the link right here, or you can go check out the “Tintian and the King’s Claw” page directly to be taken there.

Wider distribution will still be a while away, since I’m focused more on getting additional stories finished rather than promoting the ones I’ve already finished at this point, but I’ll be working on that over the summer.

But for you… no waiting! You can go get one right now!

February Is Weirdly Warm

I mean, I live in Southern Ontario… it should be deep-freeze right now. And yet it’s been positive degrees, the snow has all melted, and the sun was bright and warm today.

It’s freakin’ me the heck out.

All joking aside, it’s nice that the weather is okay (as opposed to constant blizzards), but this means little to a writer such as myself. My days off are consumed with sitting in front of the computer, shunning the outside world and cramming words onto digital-paper. Still, it’s nicer to do that while it’s sunny out, I suppose.

ANYway, busy busy busy! I have a request for a short story I need to finish today (a weird semi-quasi-historical-sci-fi), plus putting the finishing touches on my Tintian novel for Print on Demand. The “Starconvoy EH-76” PoD has been doing okay (about par with the digital version), so that’s encouraging. Really, the goal at this point is to just keep putting content out.

I’d better get back to it! Hope everyone is having an amazing start to the month!

Positive Review!

So I frequent a website called “Shut Up & Sit Down”, and the other day one of the posters had this to say:

Last week, faithful commentator Marx mentioned his writing and I wanted to take a second to recommend one of his series.

The elevator pitch for Tintian and the King’s Claw is that it’s a science fiction take on Tintin. And while that’s true, it really undersells just how inventive and clever the translation is while still retaining the central heart of the original.

All of the things you love about Tintin is here, but the story also stands alone as a crackerjack and thoughtful space adventure. The changes Marx made to the Tintin mythos aren’t just to distract the Hegre estate, but also modernize and deepen the story.

I highly recommend it for yourself or for anyone you know in their Tintin years. You can pick up all five episodes on Amazon via Marx’s website.

I just wanted to thank Eize Basa for the amazing comments, and for directing people here. So unbelievably nice to get the feedback and the traffic! Thanks!

In other news, working on a few more short stories today. Gosh, I love writing… anyway, hope everyone out there is having a great day!

The Slow and Steady Grind

Well, I’m back at my other job (the one that pays for THIS job), but that’s okay. I finished Novel 4 (well, the first draft at least), I’ve queried a few potential agents, and I’ve submitted a short story to a contest to see how that one goes.

Overall, the wheel keeps grinding.

Today I’m going to do some work on another short story I think, maybe 2, because I want to give myself a few weeks away from Novel 4 before I start heavy edits (just to give myself a bit of mental space). I may even try to write a few submission-level short stories… you know, stuff for F&SF and/or Asimov’s. It’s been a few years since I submitted to them, and I didn’t get any traction last time, but I did try a lot, and that’s worth something at least, I hope.

Plus, my best paying gig by far was a short story… so I plan to put a bit more time and energy into that. Might as well… as much as I love writing novels, they take time, and it’s far easier to post short stories on this here website!

Anyway, overall this has been a very productive first month of 2019. Hopefully all of you have had great starts to the year as well!

First Draft of Novel 4 finished!

Yup! You heard it here first… Novel 4’s first draft is done.

Now, keep in mind that I (and many other authors, apparently) refer to said first draft as the “vomit draft”, in that everything that’s anything ends up on the page. The next task is to try and manipulate what I have written into something more resembling a coherent, intelligent story… which, to be honest, I think I should be fine with.

Downsides include that the novel is a bit shorter in its current form than I am super happy with (50k words), but that is a fixable issue. As I read through it, I’ll see if there are any areas I can work a few more paragraphs into while I am also trimming and cleaning up the story. Still, I suspect it will end up between 50-60k words, which would make it shorter than most of my other novels (which all hover around the 75k word mark), but that’s okay! If that’s how long it takes to tell the story, that’s how long it takes.

But, more exciting for me at least, is that for the next month I’m going to get to work on something else! I finished one short story while I was here on Hoth, I have two more in the planning stages, and I’m going to see what i can do for a layout of Novel 5 (in all honesty, I suspect I will take one of my four or five other unfinished works and see if I can clean-up and finish those… few things I hate as much as unfinished art!). Maybe that “space marshal-cop-police in space” story I started a few years back… hmmm. Well, we’ll see! Exciting!

Last note: first day off, I wrote 500 words. Second day, 1,500. Third day, 2,400. Fourth day, 4,200. Sadly, today I return home and will probably only get about 2,000 done again… but still. It’s crazy to realize how much I could be outputting if I only had the time. Oh well! One day.

Novel 4 Progress!

So I’ve been on Hoth for 3 days now and managed to get a fair bit done (finished a short story, for example). The print version of Starconvoy EH-76 is out in the world, and I’ve sold my first couple copies, which is nice. Sure, it’s probably not going to take the literary sci-fi world by fire, but it is out there and I am proud of it. So that’s definitely something.

I’ve also committed to a bunch of stuff when I get back home, but that’s not for another three days, and until then, all I have to do is focus on my writing, which is amazing. Big fan, gotta tell you.

Novel 4 (the next in the Tintian series) is moving along at a relatively healthy clip. Had a long walk with my partner, discussing the story and how I intend to get myself out of the corner I’ve kinda written myself into. The temptation to put it aside (because it’s going to be a hard bit of writing, honestly) and work on something new is pretty powerful, but I’m going to fight that urge. It’s better to get this finished first, because as we all know, the hardest part about being a novelist isn’t getting a book started, but getting them finished! And then after you get one finished, working on the next one… and then the next one… and so on.

Anyway! Also of note, I finished “Lock In” by John Scalzi. Lovely little police procedural. Tonne of fun to read… I continue to aspire to be as good at balancing humour, thoughtful science, and action as Scalzi is.

Print Version of Starconvoy EH-76 Now Available! Woo!

Says it all in the title, folks. Links are up on the Starconvoy EH-76 page, but since efficiency is a thing and all, here’s the link right here:


Currently only available through the USA Amazon store, but the UK store should be near behind. Sadly, no specifically Canadian version (Sorry, outta my hands… just the way Amazon handles this stuff), but with some luck maybe before too long… but that’s a future-me problem.

For now, just going to get back to writing the fourth novel and basking in a job well done with novel two! Thanks folks!

Print on Demand Progress!

Yes., I know, it’s been literally months. I know! I know. Life has an ugly way of messing up plans, especially in November and December.

But today I am FINALLY cleaning up the handful of mistakes in the Print on Demand versions of my two novels, and then re-uploading the files (for both the PoD and digital versions), and then that’s done and I can leave it in the rear-view mirror while I work on Novel 4 over my week of writing-retreat.

Which I am SO looking forward to.

I mean, I love my paying job. I do. But I’d drop it in a heartbeat if I could make even a modest living by writing, and my few weeks off over the year where I can to just focus on writing are lovely, warm, friendly reminders of that. The ability to just wake up, set my own schedule, and crank through a few tens of thousands of words.

It’s gonna be great!

Anyway! That’s for next week. For TODAY, I return to the editing already in progress! Hope everyone is having a great January so far!

The Upsides of Being Sick

Let’s be honest, there isn’t much good about being sick. I mean, it’s not a serious sickness (thankfully), just my butt being kicked for pushing too hard around the winter purchasing season. A cough, general soreness, everything being slower and slightly more painful.

But there are a few upsides. For example, today I had a day off from work to help recover. And I spent the vast majority of it reading.

In fact, I polished off Book 2 of “The Collapsing Empire” by my writing patronus John Scalzi (book 2 is called “The Consuming Fire”). It’s a quick read, but still, me finishing the entire thing in a few hours was an unexpected pleasure… I stayed tucked under the blankets, snuggled with two of my kittens, and just read. And that was lovely.

So here’s to taking some much needed me-time, and doing something good and proactive with it. Scalzi is still a tonne of fun to read (although I find he has a few too many characters that like to “cut through the bullshit”, but that’s an acceptable flaw). I look forward to the day my writing has the emotional and comedic depth that he manages.

Anyway! Progress on the novels will have to wait a few more days for me to more fully recover, but that’s okay. Hopefully everyone out there is having a good start to 2019!

Another Successful Circumnavigation of the Sun!

Well, it’s that arbitrary, and yet somehow important, time of year again. Time to take stock of the previous 12 months and to plan and look forward towards the next 12.

Ups include finishing Novel 2 and almost finishing Novel 3 (well, still with my agents, but I’ll bug them after the holidays), figuring out most of the kinks with the Print On Demand version of my two books, and lots of positive memories from the last year.

Downs include… well, lots of stuff really, but that’s okay! Overall, I’m still satisfied with my progress as a writer (and as a human in the grand scheme of things), and I’m looking forward to getting another two or even three novels finished this year!

One of the big downsides was my inability to get a writers group restarted this year… going to put sufficient energy and time into making sure it happens early 2019!

Right, with that, I’m off to a small gathering of friends for New Year’s Eve! I hope everyone has a happy and successful 2019!

A Bit of a Breather, At Last!

Well, I didn’t get the novel ready for Print on Demand by Xmas (which is now a few days past)… I came close, but the last week of work I was pulling over 70 hours and it just wasn’t a good place to be in order to both work myself to exhaustion AND try to edit a novel.

It will be done soon, hopefully before January (or very, very shortly thereafter). I’ve gotten the results from a few good beta readers, and incorporating the changes will be pretty straight-forward.

But, more importantly, I’m back to sane hours and work schedules, and things have settled a bit at work (I expect the weekend will be insane again, but that’s a Saturday-me problem, not a Now-me problem!).

Anyhoo, hope everyone’s holidays were great, and more exciting news coming soon!

So close!

My beta readers (those incredible, amazing, wonderful people!) have been finishing up with the print version of Starconvoy EH-76.

There are a few typos that will need to be fixed (a missed “J” here, a lower case “i” there), but overall it seems to be ready! Which is good, since there are still 8 more days before Xmas!

Next year, I’m going to have to jump through all these hoops in October, get everything ready in advance, and then just RELEASE it in December, rather than trying to do both the grunt work and the release at the same time. Too stressful!

Not much else to report on. Work continues to be busy (a good problem to have), writing continues to be focused on editing tasks… and that’s about all that’s been accomplished, really! Even as I write this on a Sunday, I am minutes away from returning to work for the day… a shorter day, thankfully, but it will almost unquestionably be a busier one.

Anyhoo! No complaints on my end, and I would like to again express my wish for everyone to have a great holiday season!

Still Working!

Lots of working! Working all the works!

Just a quick stop by to say that I’m still writing (a short story for the end of the month at least, hopefully more on the novel, time provided), but as mentioned a few times previously, November and December are nuts. Nuts-nuts.

But! No fear! I’m still here, and I’m still producing stuff, and come January there will be a deluge of new content, both for submission to various publications and on this here website! Woo!

Thank you for your continued patience, and I STILL hope to have the Print on Demand novels available by the end of this week!

December Is Upon Us!

… or possibly Up On Us… hard to know sometimes.
Anyway! It’s been a whirlwind few weeks, which is why I haven’t written anything here! My apologies! The holidays are always rough at the best of times.

That stated, I won that short story contest in mid-November (yay!), and since then I’ve been pouring all my energy into getting the Print on Demand versions of Starconvoy and Tintian available before Xmas. Progress is good! The Advanced Reader Copies have arrived, and a handful are in the amazing, loyal hands of beta-readers, scouring the books for formatting errors.

My current goal is to have the novel (at least Starconvoy, hopefully both!) available on Amazon by December 10th for people who want to purchase a copy for themselves or a loved one (or, heck, an enemy who they think will enjoy good sci-fi!) before the end of the massive commercial chaos of the season is over. Then in January I can spend some time and energy trying to get wider distribution of my book through avenues other than Amazon (I have a few lined up in a very rough way, but nothing definite).

Other than that, I haven’t actually done much writing in the last few weeks. My second job which pays for editing costs is insane from November 1st to December 31st… but no excuses. I have a few short stories I’m submitting to contests, and of course work on Novel 4 waits for no one!

Anyhoo! More updates soon, and of course I’ll let everyone here know when Starconvoy is available in print!

Won a Short Story Contest!

Woo! Go team!

One of the short stories I submitted to the Infinity-related podcast “White Noise” won!

Not a huge prestigious award or anything like that, but it is nice to submit something and have people like it.

The story is called “The 10 Commandments of War on Varuna”, and sadly, like the last one, it won’t make much sense to anyone who isn’t familiar with Infinity-lore, but I am really quite proud of how it turned out.

No time to post it tonight, but I will try to put up the story itself on this website on Tuesday… but just wanted to let everyone know I won! Yay!

Anyway, work at the game store is still insane (and getting more insane daily as Christmas approaches), but winning was still a little ray of sunshine in a pretty gray month.

Hope everyone is doing well!